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Dòng 9:
The scene dissolves and reforms into a new one. Snape is telling Lily about Hogwarts and magic, including [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Places/Azkaban|Azkaban]] and the [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Dementor|Dementors]]. When Lily inquires about Snape's parents, he says that they are still arguing, revealing Snape's unhappy home life. When Petunia appears and insults Snape, a tree branch above breaks and falls on her. Accusing Snape of breaking the branch, Lily goes away, leaving him miserable and confused.
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The scene reforms once more, and inside the Hogwarts Express, Snape finds a compartment with Lily and two boys. She is upset over her sister's hurtful words. Snape begins to say that Petunia is only a Muggle but instead grandly announces they are setting off for Hogwarts. When he mentions she had better be in Slytherin, one of the boys, the young [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/James Potter|James Potter]], scornfully remarks to his friend, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sirius Black|Sirius Black]] that he would rather leave than be in Slytherin, and prefers Gryffindor. Sirius points out that his entire family have been in Slytherin. Snape engages in a little battle of words with both Sirius and James, until an indignant Lily asks Snape to follow her to different compartment.
Dòng 15:
And the scene dissolves again into Hogwarts' Great Hall during the House sorting ceremony. Lily is sorted into Gryffindor, much to Snape's dismay. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Remus Lupin|Remus Lupin]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Peter Pettigrew|Peter Pettigrew]], and James Potter are also sorted into Gryffindor, joining Sirius Black. Finally, Snape is sorted into Slytherin. At the Slytherin table, he receives a pat on the back from a Prefect, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Lucius Malfoy|Lucius Malfoy]].
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The scene switches for the sixth time and is the same memory Harry saw before when he peeked into Snape's Pensieve during their [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Occlumency|Occlumency]] lessons. Harry keeps his distance somewhat, not caring to witness this memory again. It ends when he hears Snape shouting "Mudblood" at Lily.
Dòng 25:
The scene switches to Dumbledore's office. Snape, grief-stricken, is slumped in a chair with a grim-looking Dumbledore standing over him. Snape asks why Dumbledore failed to keep Lily and her family safe. Dumbledore replies that they put their faith in the wrong person, much as Snape had in trusting Voldemort to spare Lily's life. He says that her son, Harry, survived. Snape wishes he were dead with Lily, and Dumbledore tells him that if he truly loved Lily, he will help protect Harry when Voldemort returns. Snape reluctantly agrees. He makes Dumbledore promise never to tell anyone that he is protecting James Potter's son, ever.
The scene shifts again and Snape is criticizing Harry to Dumbledore, saying he is like James Potter. Dumbledore replies that other teachers report Harry to be a modest, likable, and reasonably talented boy. He asks Snape to keep an eye on [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Professor Quirrell|Professor Quirrell]].
With a whirl of color everything changes again and Snape and Dumbledore are now standing in the entrance hall as the [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Major Events/Yule Ball|Yule Ball]] is ending. Snape tells Dumbledore that [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Igor Karkaroff|Karkaroff]]'s [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Dark Mark|Mark]] is becoming darker as well and that he plans on fleeing if the Mark burns. When Dumbledore asks if Snape is tempted to do the same, Snape denies it and says he is not a coward. Dumbledore then muses that perhaps students are Sorted too soon, leaving Snape shocked.
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