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Chazz (thảo luận | đóng góp)
General cleanup, typos, links, and grammar; plus why all the memories at once?
Dòng 9:
The scene dissolves and reforms into a new one. Snape is telling Lily about Hogwarts and magic, including [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Places/Azkaban|Azkaban]] and the [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Dementor|Dementors]]. When Lily inquires about Snape's parents, he says that they are still arguing, revealing Snape's unhappy home life. When Petunia appears and insults Snape, a tree branch above breaks and falls on her. Accusing Snape of breaking the branch, Lily goes away, leaving him miserable and confused.
 
The scene reforms againchanges into a different memory. Snape is standing on [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Places/Platform 9 and Three Quarters|Platform Nine and Three Quarters]] next to a thin, sour-looking woman whom Harry recognizes as Snape's mother, Eileen Prince. Snape is staring at Lily's family. Petunia and Lily are arguing. Petunia calls Lily a freak for being a witch, and Lily retorts that Petunia had not thought so when she wrote to [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Albus Dumbledore|Professor Dumbledore]], asking for admission to the school. An embarrassed Petunia, realizing that Lily and Snape read her letter, insults them, and they part on bad terms.
 
The scene reforms once more, and inside the Hogwarts Express, Snape finds a compartment with Lily and two boys. She is upset over her sister's hurtful words. Snape begins to say that Petunia is only a Muggle but instead grandly announces they are setting off for Hogwarts. When he mentions she had better be in Slytherin, one of the boys, the young [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/James Potter|James Potter]], scornfully remarks to his friend, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sirius Black|Sirius Black]] that he would rather leave than be in Slytherin, and prefers Gryffindor. Sirius points out that his entire family have been in Slytherin. Snape engages in a little battle of words with both Sirius and James, until an indignant Lily asks Snape to follow her to different compartment.
Dòng 15:
And the scene dissolves again into Hogwarts' Great Hall during the House sorting ceremony. Lily is sorted into Gryffindor, much to Snape's dismay. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Remus Lupin|Remus Lupin]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Peter Pettigrew|Peter Pettigrew]], and James Potter are also sorted into Gryffindor, joining Sirius Black. Finally, Snape is sorted into Slytherin. At the Slytherin table, he receives a pat on the back from a Prefect, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Lucius Malfoy|Lucius Malfoy]].
 
The scenenext changesscene todepicts Lily and Snape arguing. Lily says they are still friends, though she detests whom Snape hangs out with, naming [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Avery|Avery]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Mulciber|Mulciber]] specifically. Snape counters by mentioning the trouble James Potter and his friends cause and hints that Lupin is a [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Werewolf|Werewolf]]. The fight is resolved and Snape is satisfied when Lily criticizes James as an "arrogant toerag."
 
The scene switches for the sixth time and is the same memory Harry saw before when he peeked into Snape's Pensieve during their [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Occlumency|Occlumency]] lessons. Harry keeps his distance somewhat, not caring to witness this memory again. It ends when he hears Snape shouting "Mudblood" at Lily.
Dòng 25:
The scene switches to Dumbledore's office. Snape, grief-stricken, is slumped in a chair with a grim-looking Dumbledore standing over him. Snape asks why Dumbledore failed to keep Lily and her family safe. Dumbledore replies that they put their faith in the wrong person, much as Snape had in trusting Voldemort to spare Lily's life. He says that her son, Harry, survived. Snape wishes he were dead with Lily, and Dumbledore tells him that if he truly loved Lily, he will help protect Harry when Voldemort returns. Snape reluctantly agrees. He makes Dumbledore promise never to tell anyone that he is protecting James Potter's son, ever.
 
The scene shifts again and Snape is criticizing Harry to Dumbledore, saying he is like James Potter. Dumbledore replies that other teachers report Harry to be a modest, likable, and reasonably talented boy. He asks Snape to keep an eye on [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Professor Quirrell|Professor Quirrell]].
 
With a whirl of color everything changes again and Snape and Dumbledore are now standing in the entrance hall as the [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Major Events/Yule Ball|Yule Ball]] is ending. Snape tells Dumbledore that [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Igor Karkaroff|Karkaroff]]'s [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Dark Mark|Mark]] is becoming darker as well and that he plans on fleeing if the Mark burns. When Dumbledore asks if Snape is tempted to do the same, Snape denies it and says he is not a coward. Dumbledore then muses that perhaps students are Sorted too soon, leaving Snape shocked.