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Messages from visitors are scribbled on the sign. Hermione thinks this is disrespectful, but it cheers Harry, who feels only gratitude. A mysterious, elderly woman approaches. Even though she is obviously a magical person, Harry is surprised and suspicious that she can see through the Invisibility Cloak. Harry asks if she is Bathilda Bagshot; she nods and leads them to a house with a garden as overgrown as the Potter residence. Inside, Harry whiffs a foul odor clinging to her, though it may be the house, which is covered by thick dust. Harry hears Bathilda calling, "Come!" from another room, causing Hermione to jump. Harry spots photographs atop a dresser and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Tergeo|removes the dust]]. A half-dozen photos are missing from their ornate frames, but Harry recognizes a young blond man in one as the same person in [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Rita Skeeter|Rita Skeeter’s]] book, ''The Life and Lies of Albus Dumbledore''. Despite Harry repeatedly asking who it is, Bathilda only vaguely stares at him, causing Harry to wonder how she was able to tell Rita Skeeter much about the Dumbledore clan. Harry tells Hermione that the man in the photo is the thief he saw in [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Lord Voldemort|Voldemort's]] mind, who stole the item from [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Gregorovitch|Gregorovitch]].
 
Bathilda motions for only Harry to go upstairs with her; as he follows her, Harry pockets the thief's photo and follows her up. Harry asks if she has something for him. Bathilda's closeseyes her eyesclose, and Harry feels his scar prickle and the Locket [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Horcrux|Horcrux]] twitch against his chest as the room momentarily darkens. Joy surges through his body, and he hears his own voice saying, "Hold him!" Harry inspects the dressing table that Bathilda has pointedpoints to, but turning, he witnesses a revolting sight: a huge snake pours out from what was Bathilda's neck, her lifeless body collapsing to the floor. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Nagini|Nagini]] attacks, biting Harry's arm and sending his wand flying. The resulting noise brings Hermione frantically running upstairs. Releasing Harry, Nagini lunges at Hermione, barely missing her. Harry, grabbing his dropped wand, yells that Voldemort is coming. Nagini lunges again as Harry drags Hermione across the bed. Hermione casts [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Confringo|Confringo]], and the spell ricochets around the room, burning Harry's hand, as they leap out the window. Voldemort, grasping at Harry, screams in fury as he and Hermione [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Apparition|Disapparate]]; his anger sears Harry's scar.
 
Pain mingles with Voldemort's memories of a cold, fateful night sixteen years before: Hallowe'en costumes, a father's smile, a toddler playing on the floor inside a cozy house. Outside, a gate creaks open as a dark figure strides through. A man yells, "Lily, take Harry and go! It's him. Go! Run! I'll hold him off!" More screams, then green flashes, and a woman's crumpled body lies upon the nursery floor. One final flash, and pain-shot darkness. <!--Been meaning to mention this for a long time, but "pain-shot darkness" is excellent prose! -PNW Raven--> Then, through Voldemort's eyes, Harry sees Bathilda's bedroom again as Voldemort retrieves the dropped photo of the thief.

Hermione's voice pierces the void, pleading for him to awake. Opening his eyes, Harry sees he is inside the tent. It is hours followingafter their escape and Harry has been ill; Hermione used the Hover charm to get him into his bunk and a Severing charm to pry the stuck Locket from his chest. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Dittany|Dittany]] healed Nagini's bite wounds. While Harry relived Voldemort's memories, he was delirious, moaning and screaming. Harry relates how Nagini was hidden inside Bathilda's corpse, withholding the most gruesome details. Nagini only spoke whento sheHarry andwhen Harrythey were alone because it was in [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Parseltongue|Parseltongue]]. Nagini immediately summoned Voldemort when Harry identified himself. Harry asks for his wand, but Hermione tearfully confesses that it is broken, probably by her ricocheting spell. Stunned, Harry asks that she try repairing it with her wand. Hermione casts a spell, but like [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ron Weasley|Ron]]'s [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Books/Chamber of Secrets/Chapter 5|fractured wand]] that never worked the same, Harry's wand is too badly damaged, and it snaps in half again when he tests it. With [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ollivander|Ollivander]] held captive by Voldemort, Harry is unsure how he will obtain another wand. Though clearly upset, Harry tells Hermione she is not to blame, then borrows her wand to take the watch, wanting to be away from her. Hermione sits by the bunk quietly sobbing.
 
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