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Bathilda motions for only Harry to go upstairs with her, while Hermione remains behind; Harry pockets the thief's photo on his way out. In the bedroom, Bathilda inquires if he is Harry Potter. He answers affirmatively and wants to know if she has something for him. Bathilda closes her eyes, and Harry feels his scar prickle and the Locket [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Horcrux|Horcrux]] twitch against his chest as the room momentarily darkens. Joy surges through his body, and he hears his own voice saying, "Hold him!" Bathilda points to a dressing table in the corner. Harry inspects it, but as he turns, he witnesses a revolting sight: a huge snake pours out from what was Bathilda's neck, her lifeless body collapsing to the floor. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Nagini|Nagini]] attacks, biting Harry's arm and sending his wand flying. The resulting noise brings Hermione frantically running upstairs. Nagini releases Harry and lunges at Hermione, barely missing her. Harry, grabbing his dropped wand, yells that Voldemort is coming. Nagini lunges again as Harry drags Hermione across the bed. Hermione casts [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Confringo|Confringo]], and the spell ricochets around the room, burning Harry's hand, as they leap out the window. Voldemort, reaching out to grasp Harry, screams in fury as he and Hermione [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Apparation|Disapparate]]; his anger causes unbearable pain in Harry's scar.
Pain mingles with Voldemort's memories of a fateful night sixteen years before: Hallowe'en costumes, a father's smile, a toddler playing on the floor inside a cozy house. Outside, a gate creaks open as a dark figure strides through. A man yells, "Lily, take Harry and go! It's him. Go! Run! I'll hold him off!" More screams, then green flashes, and a woman's crumpled body lies upon the nursery floor. One final flash, and pain-shot darkness. <!--Been meaning to mention this for a long time, but "pain-shot darkness" is excellent prose! -PNW Raven--> Then, through Voldemort's eyes, Harry sees Bathilda's bedroom again as Voldemort picks up the dropped picture containing the thief's photo. Hermione's voice pierces the void, pleading for him to awake. Opening his eyes, Harry sees he is inside the tent. Hermione says they escaped, but it is hours later and he has been sick; she used the Hover charm to get him into his bunk and a Severing charm to pry the stuck Locket off his chest. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Dittany|Dittany]] healed Nagini's bite wounds. While Harry relived Voldemort's memories, he was delirious, moaning and screaming. Harry relates what happened upstairs and that Nagini was hidden inside Bathilda's corpse, though he withholds the most gruesome details. Nagini only spoke when she and Harry were alone because it was in [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Parseltongue|Parseltongue]]. Nagini immediately summoned Voldemort when Harry identified himself. Harry asks for his wand, but Hermione tearfully confesses that it is
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