Khác biệt giữa bản sửa đổi của “Harry Potter dành cho Muggle/Truyện/Hội Phượng Hoàng/Chương 10”
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Dòng 5:
After a restless night, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Harry Potter|Harry]] awakens to chaos: everyone is racing around, trying to pack as quickly as possible. The Advance Guard is accompanying Harry and the others to King’s Cross Station, and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sirius Black|Sirius]] insists upon coming along in his dog form, much to [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Molly Weasley|Mrs. Weasley]]'s dismay. They wait for [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sturgis Podmore|Sturgis Podmore]], who is late, but eventually move on without him. Sirius, who has been confined until now, scampers around and snaps at pigeons.
After bidding everyone goodbye on [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Places/Platform 9 and Three Quarters|the platform]], Harry, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ron Weasley|Ron]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Hermione Granger|Hermione]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Fred and George Weasley|Fred, George]], and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ginny Weasley|Ginny]] board the
An awkward moment passes. Cho leaves and Ginny [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Evanesco|cleans]] the stinksap off them. Ron and Hermione return to announce that [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Draco Malfoy|Draco Malfoy]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Pansy Parkinson|Pansy Parkinson]] are the Slytherin Prefects; [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ernie Macmillan|Ernie Macmillan]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Hannah Abbott|Hannah Abbott]] are Hufflepuff Prefects; and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Anthony Goldstein|Anthony Goldstein]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Padma Patil|Padma Patil]] are the Ravenclaw Prefects. Ron tells a bad joke, at which Luna laughs inappropriately loudly. Harry notices Sirius Black's name on Luna's magazine cover. He asks to borrow it and reads an article claiming Sirius’ alter-ego is a singer before realizing the story is bogus. Hermione disdainfully states that the ''Quibbler'' is "rubbish," to which Luna replies, "My father’s the editor."
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