Khác biệt giữa bản sửa đổi của “Harry Potter dành cho Muggle/Truyện/Hội Phượng Hoàng/Chương 10”

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the use of "they" is correct in this context, and less awkward than "he / she"
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After a restless night, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Harry Potter|Harry]] awakens to chaos: everyone is racing around, trying to pack as quickly as possible. The Advance Guard is accompanying Harry and the others to King’s Cross Station, and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sirius Black|Sirius]] insists upon coming along in his dog form, much to [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Molly Weasley|Mrs. Weasley]]'s dismay. They wait for [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sturgis Podmore|Sturgis Podmore]], who is late, but eventually move on without him. Sirius, who has been confined until now, scampers around and snaps at pigeons.
 
After bidding everyone goodbye on [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Places/Platform 9 and Three Quarters|the platform]], Harry, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ron Weasley|Ron]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Hermione Granger|Hermione]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Fred and George Weasley|Fred, George]], and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ginny Weasley|Ginny]] board the HogswartHogwarts Express. Fred and George depart to talk business with [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Lee Jordan|Lee Jordan]]. When Harry suggests finding a compartment, Hermione and Ron awkwardly explain that they must join the other [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Major Events/Prefects|prefects]] for instructions, but promise to return soon. Harry and Ginny search for an empty compartment; Harry notices that everyone is looking at him, then remembers that [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/The Daily Prophet|the ''Daily Prophet'']] has been calling him a lying madman all summer. They meet [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Neville Longbottom|Neville]], and Ginny leads them into a compartment. Inside is an odd-looking girl reading a [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/The Quibbler|magazine]] upside down. Ginny introduces her as [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Luna Lovegood|Luna Lovegood]], a Ravenclaw student. Their discussion turns to Neville’s birthday present, a rare [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Mimbulus Mimbletonia|''Mimbulus Mimbletonia'']] plant. He pokes it with his wand to show its defense mechanism, and the entire compartment is sprayed with horrid-smelling green pus just as [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Cho Chang|Cho Chang]] walks in to greet Harry.
 
An awkward moment passes. Cho leaves and Ginny [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Evanesco|cleans]] the stinksap off them. Ron and Hermione return to announce that [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Draco Malfoy|Draco Malfoy]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Pansy Parkinson|Pansy Parkinson]] are the Slytherin Prefects; [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ernie Macmillan|Ernie Macmillan]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Hannah Abbott|Hannah Abbott]] are Hufflepuff Prefects; and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Anthony Goldstein|Anthony Goldstein]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Padma Patil|Padma Patil]] are the Ravenclaw Prefects. Ron tells a bad joke, at which Luna laughs inappropriately loudly. Harry notices Sirius Black's name on Luna's magazine cover. He asks to borrow it and reads an article claiming Sirius’ alter-ego is a singer before realizing the story is bogus. Hermione disdainfully states that the ''Quibbler'' is "rubbish," to which Luna replies, "My father’s the editor."