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→‎Analysis: A good edit, but spoilers belong in GP even if they are local to this one book
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After a restless night, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Harry Potter|Harry]] awakens to chaos: everyone is racing around, trying to pack as quickly as possible. The Advance Guard hasis reassembled to accompanyaccompanying Harry and the others to King’s Cross Station, and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sirius Black|Sirius]] insists upon coming along in his dog form, much to [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Molly Weasley|Mrs. Weasley]]'s dismay. They wait for [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sturgis Podmore|Sturgis Podmore]], who is late, but eventually move on without him. Sirius, who has been confined until now, scampers around and snaps at pigeons.
 
The groupAfter bidsbidding everyone goodbye on [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Places/Platform 9 and Three Quarters|the platform]], and Harry, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ron Weasley|Ron]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Hermione Granger|Hermione]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Fred and George Weasley|Fred, George]], and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ginny Weasley|Ginny]] board the trainHogswart Express. Fred and George depart to talk business with [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Lee Jordan|Lee Jordan]]. When Harry suggests finding a compartment, Hermione and Ron exchange awkward looks andawkwardly explain that they have tomust join the other [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Major Events/Prefects|prefects]] for instructions., Theybut leave, promisingpromise to return soon. Harry and Ginny, tryingsearch to findfor an empty compartment, struggle the length of the train; Harry notices that everyone is looking at him, and then remembers that [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/The Daily Prophet|the ''Daily Prophet'']] has been sayingcalling all summer that he ishim a lying madman. Asall theysummer. near the rear car, theyThey meet [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Neville Longbottom|Neville]]., and Ginny leads them into a compartment. withInside ais strangean odd-looking girl inside who emanates "an aura of distinct dottiness." She is reading a magazine called [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/The Quibbler|''The Quibbler''magazine]] upside down. Ginny introduces her as [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Luna Lovegood|Luna Lovegood]], a Ravenclaw student in her year. After attempting to converse with her, theTheur discussion turns to Neville’s birthday present, a rare [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Mimbulus Mimbletonia|''Mimbulus Mimbletonia'']] plant. He pokes it with his wand, trying to show them its defense mechanism, and the entire compartment is sprayed with horrid-smelling green pus just as [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Cho Chang|Cho Chang]] walks in to greet Harry.
 
An awkward moment passes. Cho leaves and Ginny [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Evanesco|cleans]] the stinksap off them. Ron and Hermione return to announce that [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Draco Malfoy|Draco Malfoy]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Pansy Parkinson|Pansy Parkinson]] are the Slytherin Prefects; [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ernie Macmillan|Ernie Macmillan]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Hannah Abbott|Hannah Abbott]] are Hufflepuff Prefects; and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Anthony Goldstein|Anthony Goldstein]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Padma Patil|Padma Patil]] are the Ravenclaw Prefects. Ron tells a bad joke, at which Luna laughs inappropriately loudly. Harry notices Sirius Black's name on Luna's magazine cover. He asks to borrow it and reads an article claiming Sirius’ alter-ego is a singer before realizing the story is bogus. Hermione disdainfully states that the ''Quibbler'' is "rubbish," to which Luna replies, "My father’s the editor."
 
Draco Malfoy and his ever-present sidekicks, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Vincent Crabbe|Crabbe]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Gregory Goyle|Goyle]] suddenly apppear. Draco snidely asks Harry how it feels being second to Ron. Hermione orders him out, though Draco hints that he recognized Sirius at the train station. After he departs, Harry and Hermione exchange troubled looks, but are unable to say anything, while Ron seems oblivious to this exchange.
 
They reach Hogwarts, but rather than [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Rubeus Hagrid|Hagrid]]’s familiar voice greeting the first-years, they hear [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank|Professor Grubbly-Plank]]. They hardly have time to ponder this before Ginny and Harry have to carry their belongings to the carriages. Harry is stunned that the carriages are no longer horseless; they are drawn by black, skeletal horse-like creatures with leathery skin and wings. Ron sees nothing, leaving Harry wondering if he has gone mad. Luna approaches, saying she also sees them, leaving Harry confused: is confirmation from someone believing in [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Crumple Horned Snorkack|Crumple Horned Snorkacks]] truly reassuring?