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[[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Scabbers|Scabbers]]' apparent demise at the claws of [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Crookshanks|Crookshanks]] appears to have ended [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ron Weasley|Ron]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Hermione Granger|Hermione]]'s friendship. Ron feels that Hermione is unsympathetic; she apparently believes that attacking rats is normal cat behavior and that there is no real evidence that Crookshanks attacked Scabbers. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Harry Potter|Harry]], however, thinks there is, given the physical evidence and Crookshanks' habithistory of attacking Scabbers. Hermione, feeling Harry always sides with Ron, storms off. Ron is taking the loss hard, and not even [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Fred and George Weasley|the twins]]' reminding him that he thought Scabbers was useless (mere days before) seems to have any effect. Finally, Harry invites him to Quidditch practice, offering him a chance to ride his [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Brooms|Firebolt]], which cheers him up a bit.
 
Arriving at the Quidditch pitch, Harry meets the team and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Rolanda Hooch|Madam Hooch]], who has been delegated to guardingguard Harry during practice. She also is entranced by the Firebolt, as the Gryffindor common room had been, and soliloquizes about it until [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Oliver Wood|Oliver]] reminds her they have to practice. And it is a magnificent practice. Inspired by the Firebolt, everyone works so well that Oliver does not have a single criticism—a first for him. Oliver asks Harry about his Dementor problem, and Harry replies, a bit untruthfully, that he has mastered the spell. As practice breaks up, Ron flies the Firebolt into the darkening sky. Madam Hooch awakens and, reprimands Harry and Ron for letting her fall asleep, and sends them to the castle. On the way back, Harry thinks he sees a pair of eyes watching him. Ron uses the [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Lumos|Lumos charm]] to reveal Crookshanks. Harry does not want to admit that he thought it might be a Grim.
 
The Quidditch match is the next morning. The Gryffindors form an honor guard and carry the Firebolt down to breakfast. Students from the other Houses, including Ravenclaw, come over to check it out, including [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Draco Malfoy|Draco Malfoy]] who, as expected, makes a wisecrack. The team head for the Quidditch pitch where Ravenclaw are already waiting. Oliver mentions Ravenclaw's new Seeker, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Cho Chang|Cho Chang]], saying she is good, but is riding a slower broom, a Comet Two-Sixty. Harry notices she is pretty. Madam Hooch blows her whistle, and the match is on. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Lee Jordan|Lee Jordan]] is commentating, althoughbut whenrepeatedly helapses startsinto advertisingdescriptions Fireboltsof ratherthe Firebolt thaninstead callingof the game, for which he gets a stern warning. Harry spots and loses the Snitch several times, finally seeing it by the Gryffindor goalposts, andwhen he accelerates for it. So does Cho, but she gasps and points downwards. Harry, seeing three Dementors on the field, pulls his wand and summons a [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Expecto Patronum|Patronus]], sending it at the Dementors. Then he blasts ahead of Cho to grab the Snitch, winning the game.
 
In the ensuing celebrations on the field, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Remus Lupin|Professor Lupin]] comments that Harry produced quite the Patronus. Harry says the Dementors had not affected him, but Lupin says they were not Dementors. It was actually Draco Malfoy, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Vincent Crabbe|Crabbe]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Gregory Goyle|Goyle]], and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Marcus Flint|Marcus Flint]] disguised in Dementor-like robes (with Draco and Goyle having shared a robe, to appear larger). [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Minerva McGonagall|Professor McGonagall]] berates them soundly and deducts House points.
 
There is a celebration in the Gryffindor Common room. Fred and George hand out treats from [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Places/Honeyduke's Sweetshop|Honeyduke's]] and The Three Broomsticks. Hermione does not join the party, saying she has 422 pages of [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Muggle Studies|Muggle Studies]] to read before Monday. Ron comments loudly that Scabbers would have liked to be there, and Hermione departs crying. Harry asks Ron to cut her some slack, but Ron says not until she starts acting a little sorry about Scabbers. The party goes on until one in the morning, when Professor McGonagall appears and sends everyone to bed.
 
Harry is awakened by Ron screaming. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sirius Black|Sirius Black]] has slashed Ron's bed curtains and was standing over him with a knife. Harry sprints down to the Common room. The noise has brought most Gryffindors from their dormitories, and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Percy Weasley|Percy]] orders everyone back to bed. Ron tells him Black was there. Professor McGonagall arrives and asks [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Sir Cadogan|Sir Cadogan]] how Black got in. Sir Cadogan states proudly that he allowed a man in because he had the passwords — a whole list of them. Livid, McGonagall demands to know who was stupid enough to write down all the passwords and then lose the list. A shamed-faced [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Neville Longbottom|Neville]] raises his hand.
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Harry produces a Patronus, but concentrating on the Snitch, he is unable to see what form it takes. Lupin, however, appears shaken by what he sees, although he later congratulates Harry on it. If Harry managed to produce a corporeal Patronus, then nearly everyone in the Quidditch pitch now knows he can produce one and what form it takes. However, only Lupin seems to understand the shape's significance.
 
Unable to remember the numerous passwords, Neville made a list and then apparently lost it, allowing Black to find the list and use it to enter the castle. The repercussions for Neville are severe: he is humiliated in front of his classmates and punished by McGonnagalMcGonagall. We will learn later just how this list fell into Sirius' hands.
 
Ron was terrified by his experience with Sirius Black, but Black’s behavior in Gryffindor Tower seems at odds with his mass murderer record. Though he slashes Ron’s curtains with a knife, he does not harm either Ron or Harry. They wonder why, when Ron yelled, Sirius ran away. Presuming, as everyone does, that Sirius was targeting Harry, it would have been simple enough for such a vicious killer to permanently silence Ron and quickly move on to the next bed to find his real target.
 
Meanwhile, there is a widening rift between Ron and Hermione. Hermione's refusal to express any sympathy or take responsibility for ScabberScabbers's apparent demise could indicate that something is preventing her from behaving appropriately. Being that she has just patched things up with Ron and Harry after a long and difficult estrangement, she may be unwilling to admit that there is another problem that could threaten their friendship. She is also increasingly tired and shrill and clearly under much stress from her studies. Considering she has always easily been at the top of her class, this is difficult to understand.
 
Harry has his first encounter with Ravenclaw's Seeker, Cho Chang, the first girl he is strongly attracted to. Harry ''"felt a slight jolt in the region of his stomach that he didn't think had anything to do with nerves."'' Cho is pretty and also a very good flier, who, at least once, thwarts Harry for the Snitch despite having a slower broom. This may make her even more attractive to Harry.
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== Questions ==
 
=== Review ===
# Is Hermione acting insensitively towards Ron after Scabbers disappears? Is she taking responsiblity for what Crookshanks might have done?
# Was Crookshanks actually responsible for Scabbers' disappearance? Explain.
# How was Sirius Black able to get into the Gryffindor Common room?
 
=== Further Study ===
# Is Hermione acting insensitively towards Ron after Scabbers disappears? Is she taking responsiblityresponsibility for what Crookshanks might have done?
# Was Crookshanks actually responsible for Scabbers' disappearance? Explain.
# Although Sirius Black enters Harry's dorm, he does nothing to harm him and instead slashes Ron's bed curtains? Why?
# Remus Lupin congratulates Harry on the strong Patronus he conjures during the Quidditch game, but its form surprises Lupin (although its shape remains unknown to readers). What form might it have taken and why was Lupin so affected by it?
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Harry's Patronus will later be revealed to be a stag. At this point, only three people know the significance of this; Black, Lupin, and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Peter Pettigrew|Pettigrew]], [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/James Potter|James]]' friends, would recognize the stag as James' [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Animagus|Animagus]] form. Of the three, Lupin is the only one here present.
 
The fact that Harry can produce a corporeal Patronus in his third year at Hogwarts is a sign that, if properly motivated, he can do magic at quite an advanced level. The Patronus charm is normally taught to sixth or seventh year students. It is because of this that, in Harry's [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Books/Order of the Phoenix/Chapter 16|fifth year]], many students seem awed by Harry's ability to perform this charm. One might wonder why they are surprised, having quite possibly seen the Patronus on the Quidditch pitch in this chapter. It is, of course, possible that the students who are most surprised by Harry's ability either were looking at something else at the time and didn't notice the white and misty stag, or if they did see it, did not understand what it was.
 
Later explanation will reveal that Sirius was actually after Scabbers, who is now missing and presumed killed by Crookshanks. Sirius may have learned from Crookshanks that Scabbers is Ron's pet, and which bed Ron sleeps in. This would explain why Sirius targeted Ron. It is likely that, with Scabbers' apparent demise being so recent, Sirius was unaware of it.
 
This also is an explanation for Scabbers' disappearance. While Ron seems to believe that Scabbers' haggard appearance is due to the actions of Crookshanks, we should recall that he was already looking poorly when Ron and Hermione met up with Harry in [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Places/Diagon Alley|Diagon Alley]]. Ron was buying rat tonic at the time as he felt that Scabbers needed it; and it was in that same visit that Crookshanks first attacked Scabbers, and Hermione bought him. Scabbers' bedraggled appearance actually dates back to the Weasley household's discovery of Black's escape; Scabbers will have heard it being discussed and will know that Black is on his way to Hogwarts. As Black got ever closer to the Gryffindor common room, Scabbers will have decided that it was time to disappear, and will have faked his own death, as we will find out he had done before, before he departed to another location where he could still stay in touch with the Wizarding world.
 
It will be found later that Black, in his Animagus form, had managed to win Crookshanks' confidence. Crookshanks had stolen the list of passwords from Neville and had passed them to Black. It is uncertain why Crookshanks was unable to inform Black of Scabbers' departure.
 
The rift between Ron and Hermione will be mended only by an outside event: [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Rubeus Hagrid|Hagrid]] writing to say that [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Buckbeak|Buckbeak]] had lost his final appeal. The Trio will re-unite to visit Hagrid, against his instructions, to try and comfort him.
 
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