Khác biệt giữa bản sửa đổi của “Harry Potter dành cho Muggle/Truyện/Tên Tù Nhân Ngục Azkaban/Chương 9”

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Chazz (thảo luận | đóng góp)
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Dòng 9:
In the final practice session before the Slytherin match, the team Captain, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Oliver Wood|Oliver Wood]], announces a schedule change: they are playing Hufflepuff rather than Slytherin. This means that their practice to counter Slytherin's moves is wasted. Hufflepuff has a completely different playing style, due in part to their new Captain and Seeker, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Cedric Diggory|Cedric Diggory]].
 
Oliver keeps cornering Harry between classes with strategy pointers, making Harry ten minutes late for [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Defence Against the Dark Arts|Defence Against the Dark Arts]]. Unfortunately, Snape is substituting for an absent [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Remus Lupin|Professor Lupin]]. After doling out House point penalties, Snape lectures about [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Werewolf|werewolvesWerewolves]], althougheven though this topic is scheduled for later in the term. He assigns a homework essay on recognizing and means to defeat werewolvesWerewolves.
 
The Quidditch match is played in a fierce storm, and Harry is unable to see. During a time-out, Hermione [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Impervius|spells]] Harry's glasses to repel water. Harry is now able to play properly, althoughbut his lighter body weight causes the wind to push him around more than Cedric. Momentarily distracted by a large black dog, possibly a [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Grim|Grim]], in the stands, Harry nearly misses seeing the Snitch that Cedric has already started after. As he chases it, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Dementor|Dementors]] appear, and hearing screaming inside his head, Harry loses consciousness and falls off his broom, plummeting to the ground.
 
Harry awakens in the Hospital Wing to find his teammates, still in their muddy uniforms, surrounding his bed. Gryffindor lost, but Harry learns that Diggory hadhas demanded a rematch after what happened, even though Wood admitted Gryffindor had been beaten. Harry is depressed thatover this is thehis first Quidditch match he has ever lostloss. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Poppy Pomfrey|Madam Pomfrey]] ousts everyone except Ron and Hermione., Theywho say thatit was Professor Dumbledore who stopped Harry's fall and has banished the Dementors. Unfortunately, Harry's [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Brooms|Nimbus 2000]] was blown into the [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Whomping Willow|Whomping Willow]] and destroyed.
 
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