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End of term exam time comes, with both written and practical tests. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Harry Potter|Harry]] cannot figure out how he was able to take exams while worrying that [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Lord Voldemort|Voldemort]] was about to burst through the door and kill him. With the exams' end, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Ron Weasley|Ron]] and [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Hermione Granger|Hermione]] are relaxed, though Harry is not; his scar is hurting more than ever, indicating danger is approaching.
Harry suddenly realizes that he must check something with [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Rubeus Hagrid|Hagrid]]
Harry, Ron, and Hermione, realizing that someone knows how to get past the three-headed dog, run to tell [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Albus Dumbledore|Professor Dumbledore]]. [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Minerva McGonagall|Professor McGonagall]] informs them that he has been called away to London. They try to trail [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Severus Snape|Professor Snape]], but fail. Harry resolves to go down the trap door as soon as the Gryffindor common room clears; Hermione and Ron immediately elect to go with him.
As they prepare to leave, [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Characters/Neville Longbottom|Neville]] notices them and attempts to block their departure, refusing to allow [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Places/Gryffindor House|Gryffindor]] to lose any more House points. Hermione regretfully puts him in a [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Petrificus Totalus|full body bind]]. Under the [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Invisibility Cloak|Invisibility Cloak]], they leave the common room and make their way to the third-floor corridor where they find the door is already open. Using the flute that Hagrid gave him, Harry plays Fluffy to sleep, then they jump down the trap door, into a crop of [[Muggles' Guide to Harry Potter/Magic/Devil's Snare|Devil's Snare]]. Hermione, recognizing what it is, but needing to be prompted by Ron, neutralizes the plant. From there, they enter a chamber
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